Hi Tarli Nice post I liked the way you added the learning intention and made it look like a diamond that way. I think you could add a bit more detail like how you got all the word ideas,other than that it was great.
Hi Tarli, I like how you added a Learning intention, and your poem, but maybe you could add a space between your words? Other than that this is a great post! Ruby H
Hi Tarli
ReplyDeleteNice post I liked the way you added the learning intention and made it look like a diamond that way. I think you could add a bit more detail like how you got all the word ideas,other than that it was great.
Hello Tarli!
ReplyDeleteI loved that you got the shape spot on like a diamond mine wasn't that great!
I couldn't find anything wrong.
Ronelle
Hi Tarli tht was an awsome post maybe next time you can put the date. i think it was a great idea to put a learning intention overall it was good
ReplyDeleteChelsey
hello Tarli
ReplyDeletegreat post i really liked the learning intention and also added interesting . there is nothing that i think you need to work on
hello Tarli,
ReplyDeleteI love how you put in a learning intention.
maybe next time you could put in a date.
well done
Isla
Hi Tarli,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a Learning intention, and your poem,
but maybe you could add a space between your words? Other than that this is a great post!
Ruby H