BRUCE MCLAREN
Date: Wednesday 5th June
LI: I explain the purpose of a piece of writing
So on wednesday we went to Bruce Mclaren and we did some cool things and i will tell you what i did soon but first i am going to tell you why we when. The only people who went where the year 6s and room 24 came with us. We went because we needed to get a feeling on how big and how a intmedit runs like the times and everything else. So we did some tech, tech is something when you make food or you do some weaving and some art.
I did some sort art and i was for maori's what we did was we did some sort of maori patterns on a plastic plate and you had to wright the meaning around the rim and i did two i did one hammerhead shark and i did some koru and i did some triangles and the triangles represent the teeth of a dragon and the koru's mean starting a new beginning and a new life. 

Hi Tarli
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in pictures and told the different types of things we did at the school next time you might want to fix up a little bit of the grammar I also thought that you put good information