Monday, 9 September 2019

MEELAHS BIRTHDAY PARTY

6 comments:

  1. Hi tarli
    I like your post and how it is about me i like that you also didn't tell me what you were giving me and I like the sub-headings but maybe check your punctuation and I love you to
    from meelah

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  2. Hi Tarli
    I absolutely love your blog post it is amazing. I love how at the end you said If you are reading this Meelah I love you. I found that super cute. There is nothing that I would change about this post. Keep up the good work!
    Bye Tarli
    Maiya

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  4. hi Tarli,
    awesome post and i think that you did a great job with your post and it seems that you guy have a really good relationship with each other you had great punctuation and what you could do now is edit it and add what you got her no that she knows what you got her but other than that it's a great post.
    bye Tarli
    from Jackson.

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  5. Hi Tarli
    I loved your post and the way you added punctuation and a learning intention I really couldn't find anything you did wrong so great job bye.

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  6. Hi Tarli
    I really liked your post I love how you told us about how you met milah and how your going to miss her so much it was a very nice post but next time don't forget to add the date but apart from that great post!

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