Dad’s house visit - New Plymouth
Cows, bushes, horse floats and farms were whizzing past. I had a sore tummy. My tummy was going up and down. 5 hours in the car felt like forever! Karissa, Ayla, Mum and me were going to New Plymouth. I was looking forward to seeing my Dad. We had McDonalds for lunch. Then dad meet us at Otorohanga. I ran up to him and jumped on him.! Dad gave me a big hug and he said “I missed you” I said “I love you and missed you too”. I feel sad being away from Dad but I love visiting him.
I love how you added a photo, to show what your dad looks like.
ReplyDeleteThe layout was very clear and easy to read.
Maybe next time add a walt so I know what type of writing it is.
Other that that great job : )
Here is my blog url if you want to check it out.
http://odsshaylac.blogspot.com
Thanks - Shayla.